Overall Feedback

Our own feedback from our thriller was that we could have spent more time on the soundtrack and make it better, also we could have used more diagetic sound in places, with the keys on the side in the kitchen.
The first group giving us feedback said that we used specific thriller conventions especially with the soundtrack. Their favored shots were the shot of the wine and the fridge and also the title coming on the shoe and its camera angle. But they said that in the clip with the fridge here was a slight pause that made it kind of stop running smoothly. They also said the final shot with the man in the window is a bit hard to notice him and he should be made noticeable. This is originally how we had it with the clip being longer, but after the rough cut we decided to shorten the clip as it would be more effective and her reaction to the video could have been more, but we did not want to over do this.
The second group watching our thriller said there was good tension throughout the thriller and has the stalking sub-genre of a thriller film. They also said we had very professional titles that work well were in the opening sequence. They believe that the rest of the film would be based on her continually being stalked and finding out who her stalker is.
Both of the first two groups said that our opening thriller sequence would pass as professional work.